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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or Madam:
     I am a sincere reader of fashion magesigns and like the design of those books.As find i have this books on the shalves in our liberary.I would like to kown if could apple for liberary card.
     TO begin with,i am grateful to you if tell me where can get to the card.Moreover,I dont know what have nessesary canditions.Finally,please give me regards some times,addresses and the terms of pay.
     Thanking for you time and attation.I looking foward to you reply soon.
    Yoursincerely
LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir（Sir） or Madam:（改成逗号） I am a sincere reader of fashion magesigns（拼写错误） and like the design of those books. As（加主语I） find i（大写）have this books on the shalves（拼写错误） in our liberary（拼写错误）. I would like to kown（拼写错误）if could apple for liberary（拼写错误） card.  TO（To） begin with, i（大写） am grateful to you if（加主语you） tell me where can get to the card. Moreover, I dont（拼写错误） know what have nessesary（拼写错误） canditions（拼写错误）. Finally, please give me regards some times, addresses and the terms of pay（payment）.  Thanking（Thanks） for you（应该用所有格形式your） time and attation（拼写错误）. I（加am）looking foward（拼写错误） to you（应该用所有格形式your） reply soon. Yoursincerely LiMing（落款分两行位于右下角：Yours sincerely， LiMing）点评：4-5分拼写和语法错误比较多，表达需要加强。格式不要出错。建议看一下范文。