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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a freshman of this university who should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department maybe offering. I am writing this letter in purpose of inquiring about the scholarships.
      Firstly, do you have the necessary application forms about the scholarships? Secondly, I also need to know whether there is a test of scholarships for candidates? At last, is there a website for releasing the information about the scholarships, so that I can know more information as soon as possible.
     Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
    （右下角） Yours sincerely,
     （右下角） Li Ming

   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a freshman of this university who should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department maybe offering（在从句中做谓语，改成offers）. I am writing this letter in purpose of inquiring about the scholarships. Firstly, do you have the necessary application forms about the scholarships? Secondly, I also need to know whether there is a test of scholarships for candidates?（这是个陈述句，用句号） At last, is there a website for releasing the information about the scholarships, so that I can know more information as soon as possible.（这是个疑问句） Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Look forward to hearing from you soon.（右下角） Yours sincerely, （右下角） Li Ming点评：8分写的不错。注意询问的语气中结尾是该用句号还是该用逗号。