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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Mandam
     I am a senior student of Qingdao University.Last week,I found a message which you're recruiting voiunteers for an international conference on globalization to be held in Qingdao.I writting the letter in purpose of asking something about it.
     Fist ,I have studied computer four years so I didn't have any professional experiences like taking or speaking withe foreigners.Can I have qualification to sign up it. Second, If I am taking part in this community and becomeing a voltunteer, what things that can help me quickly to adapt to this job I'd better do or learn before the conference opean.
     Thanks for your time and I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my question into your consideation.
     Your sincerely
     Ling ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Mandam（Madam）（加逗号） I am a senior student of Qingdao University. Last week, I found a message which you're recruiting voiunteers（拼写错误）for an international conference on globalization（international和globalization虽然词性不同但都有“国际性、世界性”的意思）to be held in Qingdao. I writing（改成am writing） the letter in purpose of asking something about it. Fist（first） , I have studied computer（加for）four years so I didn't have any professional experiences like taking or speaking withe（with） foreigners. Can I have qualification to sign up it.（这是个问句，要用问号） Second, If（if） I am taking part in this community and becomeing a voltunteer（两个单词拼写错误）, what things that can help me quickly to adapt to this job I'd better do or learn before the conference opean（拼写错误）. Thanks for your time and I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my question into your consideation（拼写错误）. Your（Yours） sincerely Ling ming（Ming）点评：5-6分拼写错误比较多了，第二段要注意语言的简练和语言的表达。希望同学看一下范文，体会一下。