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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    　 Due to success in the NETEM next January, high quality preparation materials are of great significance to me. I wonder if you would be kind enough to provide me with essential books in your bookstore.
     Firstly, could you give me a list of the books that you recommend? Secondly, how do I pay for the books? Lastly, what is the manner you send the books to me and how fast can they be delivered after you receive my subscription?
     I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for time and consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours truly, 　
    　 Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,　 Due to success（还没有考试，不能说由于在…的成功） in the NETEM next January, high quality preparation materials are of great significance to me. I wonder if you would be kind enough to provide me withessential books in your bookstore. Firstly, could you give me a list of the books that you recommend? Secondly, how do I pay for the books? Lastly, what is the manner you send the books to me and how fast can they be delivered after you receive my subscription? I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for（最好加个your） time and consideration. Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,      Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分一二段的内容用了很多模板内容。