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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
     As I am going to take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools, I want to buy some books for these exams in your book store. And I havethree questions as follows.
     Firstly, could you recommend me some books about it? And I will really appreciate if you may give me some particular accounts as regards author, publishing house, price and the time of publish of the books. Secondly, I want to know whether you could send them to me by ESM and I will remit money to you. Thirdly, I will thank you if could inform me when your store have some new books about it.
     I will be much grateful if you can reply to me.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, As I am going to take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools, I want to buy some books for these exams in your book store. And I havethree questions as follows. Firstly, could you recommend me some books about it? And I will really appreciate if you may give me some particular accounts as regards author, publishing house, price and the time of publish of the books. Secondly, I want to know whether you could send them to me by ESM and I will remit money to you. Thirdly, I will thank you if（加主语you） could inform me when your store have some new books about it. I will be much grateful if you can reply to me.Yours sincerely,Li ming（Ming）点评：6分整体写的还可以，第二段的模板内容用的有点多。