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Dear sir or madam,
    I’m an undergraduate from . I heard the news that your lawyer office is looking for a lawyer assistant from your website. I wonder if I can ask some questions about the job.
    First, does every candidate need to have a National Judicial Examination certificate? I took the exam 1 month ago and I don’t know if I can get the certificate or not. Second, if it is important to have high English proficiency? I took both bachelors’ degrees in law and English and I wonder if it is helpful. Last, do I need working experience? I will be graduate next year and I worried about my lack of working experience.
    It will be a great honor if you write back. I’m waiting for the reply. Thank you.
   
    Yours sincerely,
    Li ming
   
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear
sir or madam（Sir or Madam）,I’m an undergraduate from（from what？）. I heard the news that your lawyer office is looking for a lawyer assistant from your website（建议放在news后，用on）. I wonder if I can ask some questions about the job.First, does every candidate need to have a National Judicial Examination certificate? I took the exam 1 month ago and I don’t know if I can get the certificate or not. Second, if it is（这是个陈述句，后面是问号，改成is it） important to have high English proficiency? I took both bachelors’ degrees in law and English and I wonder if it is helpful. Last, do I need working experience? I will be graduate（注意前面是be） next year and I worried（worry about或是be worried about） about my lack of working experience.It will be a（改成my）great honor if you write back. I’m waiting for the reply. Thank you.（去掉）Yours sincerely,Li ming（LiMing）点评：6-7分写的蛮不错的，但是要注意这些细节内容。