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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a student of this University who is interested in English. I would like to know some information about English Club.
    First of all, whether the English Club needs its members have a good command of English. Secondly, what is the size of the English Club, and what after-class activities will be held? Thirdly, what are the dates which these activities will be held?
    I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of this University who is interested in English. I would like to know some information about（加定冠词the） English Club.First of all, whether the English Club needs its members have a good command of English. Secondly, what is the size of the English Club, and what after-class activities will be held? Thirdly, what are the dates which these activities will be held? I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following（以上的，above） information. Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Ming 点评：7分之前修改过的，为了更快的修改完每位同学的作文，每个题目每位同学限提交一篇进行修改。谢谢合作。