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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
As i am planning to take the National Test of MA candidates at Guang Hua college of the Law. I eager to ask for some information about the test. It is grateful that your patient to solve my confusion.
I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requets.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,As i（大写） am planning to take the National Test of MA candidates at Guang Hua college（具体的一所学校，首字母大写） of the Law.（这不是一句完整的话，句号改成逗号） I eager（这是个形容词，前边加be动词am） to ask for some information about the test. It is grateful that your patient（这里要用名词patience）to solve my confusion.Firstly, how many candidates will be setted（set的过去分词是它本身） in the recent year.（这是个问句）Secondly, i（大写）also need to know the reference book that specified, （加and their）names and authors. Thirdly, i（大写）wonder if it is necessary to mail recommendation（拼写错误） letter or my resume befor（拼写错误）.I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requets（拼写错误）. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：5-6分错误有点多，要注意拼写和细节。