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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madan:
     I am asuper fan ofbooks.I am interested in all kind of books specially on art and literature.Due to these reasons, I am writing the emailto enquire some information about the rules of our collegelibrary.
     Iwant to know thelibrary opening time. Is the library opening to the public or the only students in our college? How many books can I borrow once a time and how long can I keep the books? What's more, if I haven't finished the books in time, can I renew those? If the books missing, what can I do for it?
    Thanks for your prompt attention. I am appreciated for your reply.
    yours sincerely,
    LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madan（Madam）:（英语里用逗号） I am asuper fan ofbooks.I am interested in all kind（用复数kinds） of books specially（especially尤其是）on（用in，因为前边用的in） art and literature.Due to these reasons, I am writing the emailto enquire some information about the rules of our collegelibrary. Iwant to know thelibrary（library’s） opening time. Is the library opening to the public or the only（only the） students in our college? How many books can I borrow once a time and how long can I keep the books（可以用代词them指代）? What's more, if I haven't finished the books in time, can I renew those（指代不明确）? If the books missing（应该用missed）, what can I do for it?Thanks for your prompt attention. I am（用will be更好） appreciated for your reply.yours（Yours） sincerely,LiMing点评：6-7分写的不错，要注意细节处和格式，不要在格式、拼写、大小写等方面失分。