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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,As I am going to take the College English Test 6,I have decided to place an order of some reference books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.Firstly, could you please recommend me some relevant books,and provide some informations about them,such as the names,authors,publish time and prices.Secondly,how do I pay for the books?By cash or by other means?Finally,I wonder if you coulddeliver the books to me by EMS before october 20,2012.Thank you for your time and help.I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.   Yours sincerely,   Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am going to take the College English Test 6, I have decided to place an order of some reference books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.Firstly, could you please recommend me some relevant books, and provide some informations（information是个不可数名词）about them, such as the names, authors, publish time and prices. Secondly, how do I pay for the books? By cash or by other means? Finally, I wonder if you coulddeliver the books to me by EMS before october（October）20, 2012.Thank you for your time and help. I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.   Yours sincerely,   Li Ming点评：7-8分写的不错，如果让人寄给你的话，最好有你的地址。注意下细节问题。