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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a senior from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature. I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination in the past one year. I wish apply for admission into your reputation university. I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.
     First, which major do I fit, and which books do I prepare for? Second, how much are the tuition fees? I would be interested to know if there any scholarships available for students. And what kind of qualifications do we need? Third, could you provide some of the instructors of the tutors?
     I look forward to your reply, and thanks for your attention.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a senior from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature. I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination in the past one year. I wish（加不定式to） apply for admission into your reputation university. I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information. First, which major do I fit, and which books do I prepare for? Second, how much are the tuition fees? I would be interested to know if there any scholarships available for students. And what kind of qualifications do we need? Third, could you provide some of the instructors of the tutors? I look forward to your reply, and thanks for your attention. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7-8分写的不错，表达稍需提高。第一段不要太长。