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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a leader of a students' group and we have a plan to climb the Mount Tai in your city.This activity is very important to us.It will be a part of our school social survey project.I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.
First of all,what is the best time to climb the mountain in a year?Secondly,what should we take and what do we need to pay attention to when we climb the mountain?Thirdly, if there is any discount on entrance tickets for students.If so,how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it?
I am expecting your early reply.Please feel free to contact me at 1234567. Yours sincerely ，
LiMing
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a leader of a students' group and we have a plan to climb the Mount Tai in your city. This activity is very important to us. It will be a part of our school social survey project. I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. First of all, what is the best time to climb the mountain in a year? Secondly, what should we take and what do we need to pay attention to when we climb the mountain? Thirdly, if there is any discount on entrance tickets for students.（这句话不如直接问is there…?） If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it? I am expecting your early reply. Please feel free to contact me at 1234567. Yours sincerely ，LiMing（落款位于右下角）点评：7分写的还可以，第一段内容有点多，说明意图即可。