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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a student of Beijing University. As I am interest in speech contest, I am writing this letter to require about some information about the City English Speech Contest which will be held in our university. I would be grateful if you supply me with the following information.
    First of all, what is the theme of the English speech contest? Secondly, are there any special demands for the participants? What’s more, what is the date will the preliminary contest be held?
    Thank you for your time and help. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
    Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student of Beijing University. As I am interest in speech contest, I am writing this letter to require（这个词是需要、命令的意思，用inquiry） about some information about the City English Speech Contest which will be held in our university. I would be grateful if you supply me with the following information.First of all, what is the theme of the English speech contest? Secondly, are there any special demands for the participants? What’s more, what is the date will the preliminary contest be held?Thank you for your time and help. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：8分写的很不错。继续加油！