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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    　As I am planning to take part in the Postgraduate Education Exam, I would like to ask some questions about it considering you are expert in this field.
    　Firstly, I wonder the exactly place where I will take part in the exam. Since I am studying in SH and I want to continue my education in NJ, I am a little puzzled where I should take the exam. Secondly, please let me know when I can know the time to know the grades and the basic line.
    　I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for time and consideration. Look forward for your reply.
                                                                    　Yours sincerely,
                                                                        　Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,　As I am planning to take part in the Postgraduate Education Exam, I would like to ask some questions about it considering you are（加不定冠词an） expert in this field.　Firstly, I wonder the exactly place where I will take part in the exam. Since I am studying in SH and I want to continue my education in NJ, I am a little puzzled where I should take the exam. Secondly, please let me know when I can know the time to know the grades and the basic line.　I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for time and consideration. Look（looking） forward for（用介词to） your reply.                                                                    　Yours sincerely,                                                                        　Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：7-8分注意细节处和格式的问题，写的还是不错的。加油。