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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a graduate from Tianjin normal University.I am writing this letter in purpose of inquirying if you have some book for a beginner in French.Therefore,I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.
     First of all,could you give me a list of the books that you recommended.Secondly,please let me know how to pay for the books which I have chosen.Lastly,what is the manner you send the books to me?
     I take this opportunity to express my deep appreciation of your kind help.I am looking forward to hearing from you.
    Your sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,  I am a graduate from Tianjin normal University. I am writing this letter in purpose of inquirying（拼写错误） if you have some book（应该用复数形式）for a beginner in French. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.  First of all, could you give me a list of the books that you recommended（为什么用过去时？）.（这是个问题，用问号）Secondly, please let me know how to pay for the books which I have chosen. Lastly, what is the manner you send the books to me?  I take this opportunity to express my deep appreciation of your kind help. I am looking forward to hearing from you.   Your（Yours）sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分写的不错，条理很清楚，要注意细节和格式，落款处位于右下角。