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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing the letter for the purpose of consulting the English training in your Foreign Language Training School.
     I am a senior student. I have past CET6. I want to go abroad and further study after I graduate. First, I hope you can recommend what course is proper for me. It can obviously improve my English proficiency within a year. Second, if you feel convenient, can you send me the table time of training? Third, I want to know how much the training courses spend.
     I will greatly appreciate you if you can give me some advises. I am looking forward to hearing fromyou .
     Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing the letter for the purpose of consulting the English training in your Foreign Language Training School.  I am a senior student. I have past（这个词是过去的意思，用pass的过去分词passed，通过） CET6. I want to go abroad and further study after I graduate. First, I hope you can recommend what course is proper for me. It can obviously improve my English proficiency within a year. Second, if you feel convenient, can you send me the table time of training? Third, I want to know how much the training courses spend（spend的主语应该是人，改成cost）.  I will greatly appreciate you if you can give me some advises. I am looking forward（加介词to，固定搭配） hearing fromyou . Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7-8分写的不错，注意细节中词语的使用和搭配问题。