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Dear Bob，
     long time no see,what is missing. You of the life in Japan? I am writing to inform you that I wish to know if you could like to recommend me some Japanese interesting scenic spots.
     I decided to a trip to Japan next month,and I have searched the relevant information in web,but the opinions vary,let me also no idea. So I want to hear your opinion.First of all,want to eat the authentic Janpanese food where to go?Secondly,where can bubble to real springs.Finaly,where the crazy better exhibition.
     Word fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you .I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yourssincerely
    LiMing

     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob， long（l大写） time no see, what is missing（什么丢了？）. You of the life in Japan?（没有谓语）I am writing to inform you that I wish to know if you could like to recommend me some Japanese interesting scenic spots. I decided to（加动词） a trip to Japan next month, and I have searched the relevant information in web, but the opinions vary, let me also no idea（没有主语，这是中式化的表达，不要这样用）. So I want to hear your opinion. First of all, （没有主语）want to eat the authentic Janpanese（拼写错误）food where to go? Secondly,where can bubble to real springs. Finaly（拼写错误）, where the crazy better exhibition.（没有谓语） Word fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you .I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.【Yourssincerely （加逗号）LiMing 】（落款部分位于右下角）点评：5分第一段写明来意，第二段就不要重复了。第二段要说明你有什么想问的。要让句子完整，有主语和谓语，平时多积累。建议找范文看一下。