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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for the admission into your esteemed institution.I am writing this letter in purpose of get essential information from you.
     First,what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your prestigious university?I already have a bacholar's degree fromBeijing University,but Iwonder ifthere are anyfurther academic qualifications.Second,how much are the tuition fees?Although I decide to be self-supporting ,I will be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students.Third,what is the situation regards acommodation?
     I would be grateful if you could be kind enough to provide me with allthe information above. I look forward to your reply and to enter your esteemed university.
   
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for the admission into your esteemed institution. I am writing this letter in purpose of get essential information from you. First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your prestigious university? I already have a bacholar's（拼写错误）degree fromBeijing University, but Iwonder ifthere are anyfurther academic qualifications. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I decide to be self-supporting, I will be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regards（不要同时出现两个谓语动词） acommodation（拼写错误）? I would be grateful if you could be kind enough to provide me with allthe information above. I look forward to your reply and to enter（前边的to是个介词，介词后用动名词）your esteemed university.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：6-7分字数稍微有点多，要尽量简洁，写的还是不错的，注意单词的拼写。