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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I have just read the notify which you sent me for taking part in the coming meeting , I am writing to inquire if you could give me a hand when I go to BeiJing next Monday .
The primary enquirements of mine are as follows . Firstly , it is my hope that you could give me a reception at the airport , or else , please tell me how can I arrive at your company . Secondly , I would like to book a room beside the meeting place , so please tell me the number of the nearest hotel . Wish you further success in your continuing work . Your prompt attention to my asking would be highly appreciated . Yours , sincerely  LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I have just read the notify（这是个动词） which you sent me for taking part in the coming meeting,（加连词and） I am writing to inquire if you could give me a hand when I go to BeiJing（Beijing） next Monday.The primary enquirements（拼写错误） of mine are as follows. Firstly , it is my hope that you could give me a reception at the airport , or else , please tell me how can I arrive at your company . Secondly , I would like to book a room beside the meeting place , so please tell me the number of the nearest hotel . Wish you further success in your continuing work . Your prompt attention to my asking would be highly appreciated. 【Yours ,（逗号谓语sincerely后） sincerely  LiMing】（落款位于右下角）点评：6分第二段可以再加一条凑足字数，要注意细节和格式。