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DearSirorMadam,IamaseniorstudentfromPekingUniversitywhoisgoingtotaketheentranceexaminationforthepost-graduatestudent.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomedetailedinformationaboutthefollowingbook.Firstly,sincethereisnottoomuchtimeleftformystudy,IwanttoknowwhetheryouhavethebookwiththenameofGoneWithWindinstoresothatit
canbeavailableformeimmediately.Secondly,withtheconsiderationofthehighqualityofyourbooks,notonlymebutalsoallofmyclassmateswanttobuyone.SoIwonderifyouareso
kindastooffermesomediscount.Lastly,Iamnotreallyquiteclearofthewayofpayment.CanIpaythebillsafterthebookisarriving?Ireallyhopethatmyquestionswillnotbringyoutoomuchtrouble.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
DearSirorMadam,IamaseniorstudentfromPekingUniversitywhoisgoingtotaketheentranceexaminationforthepost-graduatestudent.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomedetailedinformationaboutthefollowingbook.Firstly,sincethereisnottoomuchtimeleftformystudy,IwanttoknowwhetheryouhavethebookwiththenameofGoneWith（加The）Windinstoresothatitcanbeavailableformeimmediately.Secondly,withtheconsiderationofthehighqualityofyourbooks,notonlymebutalsoallofmyclassmateswanttobuyone.SoIwonderifyouaresokindasto
offermesomediscount.Lastly,Iamnotreallyquiteclearofthewayofpayment.CanIpaythebillsafterthebookisarriving?Ireallyhopethatmyquestionswillnotbringyoutoomuchtrouble.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMing点评：5-6分字数太多。要简练的写出应有的内容。