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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am preparing for the coming CET—6 test next December but I have not got a proper book for writing till now. Therefore, I write this letter to you to ask wether you can render me the following books:A writing book with several high—marked text as well as the key to improve my writing skills as soon sa possible.Also,I’m in need of a vocabulary book which include all the 5500 words for CET—6 test.
    Besides,your suggestions for a better way to pay for them would be highly appreciate .At last I wonder in which way will you take them to me.
    I hope you would answer me at your earlist convenience.
     Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am preparing for the coming CET—6 test next December but I have not got a proper book for writing till now. Therefore, I write this letter to you to ask wether（拼写错误） you can render me the following books: A writing book with several high—marked text as well as the key to improve my writing skills as soon sa（as） possible. Also, I’m in need of a vocabulary book which include（应该用第三人称单数形式） all the 5500 words for CET—6 test.Besides, your suggestions for a better way to pay for them would be highly appreciate. At last I wonder in which way will you（这是个陈述句，用you will） take them to me. I hope you would answer me at your earlist（拼写错误） convenience.  Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming 点评：5-6分格式上不是很好，建议三段式，第一段说明意图，第二段分条列出你的问题，最后一段感谢和期待。