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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a senior who is going to prepare for the NETEM and has decided to subscribe some books regarding the exam. With due consideration of the reputation of your bookstoreand the book's quality, I would like to buy the reference books.
    Firstly,the way ofthe payment, such as crash or credit card, does which youwould like to accept.Secondly,I would like to expressmy appreciate if you could send them to me by EMS. Thirdly, howmany days I can recieve the books.
    I would like to appreciate your kind-hearted to consider my propasls. I am looking forward to here from you soon.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a senior who is going to prepare for the NETEM and has decided to subscribe some books regarding the exam. With due consideration of the reputation of your bookstoreand the book's quality, I would like to buy the reference books.Firstly,the way ofthe payment, such as crash or credit card, does which youwould（这里有点乱，疑问句的话用which would you，陈述句的话去掉does） like to accept.Secondly,I would like to expressmy appreciate（这里应该用名词） if you could send them to me by EMS. Thirdly, howmany days I can recieve（拼写错误） the books.I would like to appreciate your kind-hearted（这是个形容词，这里应该用名词） to consider my propasls（拼写错误）. I am looking forward to here（hear） from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：6分错误有点多，模板的机构可以用，但是不要用太多模板或范文中的内容。