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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of Sichuan University and my specialty is Chinese. I plan to continue to studying and take part in the exam of postgraduate in your school. So I request you some questions. To begin with, which major will I prepare to review, and which books should I buy? What is more, if convenience, can you tell me some information of the tutors. Last but not least, can I have some opportunities to go to other brother schools where I can interchange and interaction if I can enroll in your university. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my request. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,Li Ming
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student of Sichuan University and my specialty is Chinese. I plan to continue to studying（前边的to是不定式，应该用原形） and take part in the exam of postgraduate in your school. So I request（这个词是要求恳求的意思，用在这里稍显不恰当） you some questions. To begin with, which major will I prepare to review, and which books should I buy? What is more, if convenience, can you tell me some information of the tutors.（用问号） Last but not least, can I have some opportunities to go to other brother schools where I can interchange and interaction if I can enroll in your university. （用问号） I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my request. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以的，注意问句末尾要用问号。
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发表于 2017-8-6 14:08:04