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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am an office staff. I am writing to see if it is possiblefor you to
    provide me withinformation regarding can I apply for to another unit test .
     First of all , what could the unit open can proof of the exam ? Need t
    o meet whatconditon? Sencond, If can open what time can get? Thirdly,
    did not take an examinationof can go back to the original unit? Gould you
    be so kind as to send me some relevantbooklets on the above mentionde
    aspects?
     Thank you very much for your time reading the letter . Looking
    forward to your letter .
    Yoursscincerely
    LiMing
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am an office staff. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me withinformation regarding can I apply for to another unit test . First of all , what could the unit open can proof of the exam ? Need to meet whatconditon（拼写错误）?（没有主语）Sencond（拼写错误）, If can open what
time can get（没有主语，不知道你要表达的意思）? Thirdly, did not take an examinationof can go back to the original unit（没有主语）? Gould you be so kind as to send me some relevantbooklets on the above mentionde（拼写错误）aspects? Thank you very much for your time reading the letter . Looking forward to your letter .Yoursscincerely（加逗号）LiMing 点评：4-5分格式比较乱，下次上传作文前先在文本文档中过滤一下。要提高你的语法知识和写作能力。
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