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Dear Sir or Madam.,
     As I am planning to have a travel to Beijing, I want to book a room during my vacation with due consideration of the good reputation of your hotel and the high quality of your service.
     Firstly, I would like to know if there is a single room available from December 5 to 10. Secondly, how much is the price, and if there are any discount available. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to choose a no-smoking room which perfect with a balcony for me.
     I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my questions. I look forward to your rely.
    Yours sincerely,
    LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam.（去掉）, As I am planning to have a travel to Beijing, I want to book a room during my vacation with due consideration of the good reputation of your hotel and the high quality of your service. Firstly, I would like to know if there is a single room available from December 5 to 10. Secondly, how much is the price,（这是个问句，后面的句子是个陈述句） and if there are any discount available. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to choose a no-smoking room which（加is） perfect with a balcony for me. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my questions. I look forward to your rely.Yours sincerely,LiMing点评：8分写的很好，注意询问心中的标点符号问题，留心自己使用的问句还是陈述句。