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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     As I am planning to take a vacation in Yunnan next week, I would like to inquiry some relevant information. I am much grateful if you are so kind as to answer my questions.
     To begin with, what is the weather like in Yunnan next week? What does the weather forecast says? Moreover, how can I go to the Kun Ming International Hotel when I arrived at the airport? And above all, which tourist attractions are worth to see? I would like to stay away from the busy tourist trails that flooded with visitors.
     Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience. Thank you for your time. Looking forward to your reply
     . Yours sincerely,
     Ling Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, As I am planning to take a vacation in Yunnan next week, I would like to inquiry some relevant information. I am much grateful if you are so kind as to answer my questions. To begin with, what is the weather like in Yunnan next week? What does the weather forecast says? Moreover, how can I go to the Kun Ming International Hotel when I arrived（用现在时） at the airport? And above all, which tourist attractions are worth to see? I would like to stay away from the busy tourist trails that（加is） flooded with visitors. Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience. Thank you for your time. Looking forward to your reply . Yours sincerely, Ling Ming点评：7-8分写的不错，注意字数不要太多。