考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(155)

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student of this University who is interested in English. I would like to request some information about English Club.First of all, whether the English Club needs its members have a good command of English. Secondly, what is the size of the English Club, what after-class activities they will be held? Thirdly, what are the dates which these activities will be held? I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Ming
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of this University who is interested in English. I would like to request（这个词是要求恳求的意思，用在这里稍显不恰当） some information about English Club.First of all, whether the English Club needs its members have a good command of English. Secondly, what is the size of the English Club,（加连词） what after-class activities they will be held（主语是they，就不要用被动语态了，或者去掉they）? Thirdly, what are the dates which these activities will be held? I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分整体写的不错，要注意细节处的表达。