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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I saw your advert for the post of sales representive in yesterday's newspaper and I would like to apply for the position.
     As you can see from my attached CV,I had the bachelor'degree on sales management. Moreover, I have been working for a fast consumption goods company for two years when I left my university. Finally, I have strong communication ability and coordinated ability,which are help for sales work.
     Please note that my current manager has agreed to write me a reference. I look forward to hearing from you.Thank you.
     Yours faithfully
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I saw your advert（advertisement，advert是注意、谈到的意思） for the post of sales representive（拼写错误） in yesterday's newspaper and I would like to apply for the position. As you can see from my attached CV, I had obtain the bachelor'（bachelor’s）degree on sales management. Moreover, I have been working for a fast consumption goods company for two years when（after？） I left my university. Finally, I have strong communication ability and coordinated ability, which are help（这里应该用形容词helpful） for sales work. Please note that my current manager has agreed to write me a reference. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully（加逗号） Li Ming点评：7-8分写的不错，条理清晰，注意拼写和格式，不要在这上面失分。