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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    　 I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration. I want to apply the position of accounting which I find from your prestigious company on the net.
     Firstly, I have had two years of varied experience in a bookstore and a market as an accounting who can keep accounts exactly and use Microsoft Word and Excel masterly. Secondly, my cheerful personality is well to cooperate with colleagues. Thirdly, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience.
    　I would be very grateful if I could have the chance to have an interview .Thanks for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,     I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration. I want to apply （加介词for）the position of accounting which I find from your prestigious company on the net. Firstly, I have had two years of varied experience in a bookstore and a market as an accounting who can keep accounts exactly and use Microsoft Word and Excel masterly. Secondly, my cheerful personality is well to cooperate with colleagues. Thirdly, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience.　 I would be very grateful if I could have the chance to have an interview .Thanks for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,  Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：7-8分写的不错，错误也比较少。第二段加入关于学历的介绍就更好了。