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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a graduate from department of Chinese language and literature form Bejing Normal univercity.I am writting this letter in order to ask for a position of a Chinese teacher in your school.
     With an attitude of diligent and efficient,I degreed theA in all of my courses . I am an easy-going girl likes reading,writing and travelling,which I think can not only help me learn the knowledgeout of class,but also know the different culture in different countries.And these experiences will dogood tomy career and colour my life.Enclosed is my resume,If you can give me an opportunity of interview ,I will do my best .
     Words fail me when I wish to express my grateful sincere to you.I look forward to you reply at you earliest convenience.
     Yours sincerely,
     LiMing
   
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a graduate from department of Chinese language and literature form Bejing（Beijing） Normal univercity（拼写错误，具体的某所大学，首字母大写）. I am writting（拼写错误） this letterin order to ask for a position of a Chinese teacher in your school. With an attitude of diligent and efficient, I degreed（degree是个名词，没有这个用法，改成got） theA in all of my courses . I am an easy-going girl （加who）likes reading, writing and travelling, which I think can not only help me learn the knowledgeout of class, but also know the different culture in different countries. And these experiences will dogood tomy career and colour my life.Enclosed is my resume,If you can give me an opportunity of interview, I will do my best . Words fail me when I wish to express my grateful sincere to you. I look forward to you（应该用所有格your） reply at you（应该用所有格your） earliest convenience.  Yours sincerely, LiMing点评：6-7分建议将第二段加入工作经验，然后把你的hobby部分简化。
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