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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I"m writing to express my interest in your recently advertisted position for a assistant manager.My complete resume is attached.
     I'm sure that I'm qualified for this position.There are three reasons as follow.First,I have always been a top student in my specialized area,match.I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard work.I'm sure such courses as business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market. Second,I have been taking an active part in campus activities. In the due process my teamwork spirit has enhanced and interpersonal skills improved.Third, I have working experience on this position.
     I would like to meet with you at your convenience to discuss the possibility of working at your company.Thank you for your consideration of my application.Looking forward to meeting you in the near future.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I"m writing to express my interest in your recently advertisted position for a assistant manager. My complete resume is attached. I'm sure that I'm qualified for this position. There are three reasons as follow. First, I have always been a top student in my specialized area, match. I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard work. I'm sure such courses as business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market. Second, I have been taking an active part in campus activities. In the due process my teamwork spirit has enhanced and interpersonal skills improved. Third, I have working experience on this position. I would like to meet with you at your convenience to discuss the possibility of working at your company. Thank you for your consideration of my application. Looking forward to meeting you in the near future. Yours sincerely, Li Ming（落款谓语右下角）点评：6分错误比较少，但是第二段写的不太好。要简练的列举出几条符合这项工作的几个方面。作文是考察你的应用能力，内容可以编造，所以你说你学数学对你申请的职业好像没有太大关系。