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    考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir of Madam,
           I’m writing to apply the job of secretary of faculty manager in your company after I saw the preferred imformation from Internet.
             First of all, I am the student of Tongji University, majoring in business management and will graduate in this summer. I have the outstanding skill of English listening comprehension and abilities to speak Chinese and English fluently and to write papers proficiently. In addition, encouraged by your company’s professional spirit, I was much greatful to be employed by your company, being a intership last year. The experience will be never unforgettable throughout of my life.
            I’ll appreciate to have the opportunity for interview. Looking forward to your reply.
                                                                            Sincerely yours
                                                                                      Li Ming
     
        考研英语作文批改点评如下：
     
Dear Sir of（or） Madam,       I’m writing to apply the job of（用介词for） secretary of faculty manager in your company after I saw the preferred imformation（拼写错误）from（改成on the） Internet.          First of all, I am the（应该用补丁冠词a） student of Tongji University, majoring in business management and will graduate in this summer. I have the outstanding skill of（改成in，skill in） English listening comprehension and （这儿最好加have）abilities to speak Chinese and English fluently and to write papers proficiently. In addition, encouraged by your company’s professional spirit, I was much greatful（拼写错误） to be employed by your company, being a intership（拼写错误） last year. The experience will be never unforgettable（unforgettable就是难忘的，前边不要加never） throughout of（throughout就是介词，去掉of） my life.         I’ll appreciate to have the opportunity for interview. Looking forward to your reply.                                                                        Sincerely yours（加逗号）                                                                                                                            Li Ming（落款部分位于右下角） 点评：5-6分错误有点多，要注意细节。第二段要简单列举（最好三条）你申请这份工作的优势。