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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a student from XX University. I learned the information about your company from your official website and I was interested in the job you offered. I am writing here to know whether you could provide me with more details in this field.
     Firstly, how many graduates will be recruited this year? Secondly, what should be prepared for the writing test? Thirdly, is there any other specific demand for certificates, like BEC, etc.
     I am looking forward your reply and your help will be appreciated. Thanks.
     Sincerely,
      Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student from XX University. I learned the information about your company from your official website and I was interested in the job you offered. I am writing here to know whether you could provide me with more details in this field. Firstly, how many graduates will be recruited this year? Secondly, what should be prepared for the writing test? Thirdly, is there any other specific demand for certificates, like BEC, etc. I am looking forward（加介词to） your reply and your help will be appreciated. Thanks. Sincerely,  Li Ming点评：8分写的很好，向满分冲击。再看一下范文分析一下自己需要提高的地方。