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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam ,
     I am a graduating student .I have read the recruitment information of your company on the Internet and would like to look for the position as a computer programmer .
     I have studied in Jinan University for four years with the master of engineering in Internetworking .During these years ,I have not only worked hard and got first in my program , but won the competition of network programming which encouraged national college students to participate in last year .What’s more , the beginning of this year ,I worked in a web-based economy as a program probationer which provided some chances to improve myself , and I benefit a lot from it .
     If I have a chance to work in your company , I would try my best to devote what I can and you would not be disappointed. In the appendix there is my contact . I hope I have the honor to talk with you face to face . Looking forward to your reply .
     Yours sincerely ,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a graduating（an undergraduate） student .I have read the recruitment information of your company on the Internet and would like to look for the position as a computer programmer. I have studied in Jinan University for four years with the master of engineering in Internet working .During these years ,I have not only worked hard and got first in my program , but won the competition of network programming which encouraged national college students to participate in last year .What’s more , the beginning of this year ,I worked in a web-based economy as a program probationer which provided some chances to improve myself , and I benefit a lot from it .  If I have a chance to work in your company, I would try my best to devote what I can and you would not be disappointed. In the appendix there is my contact. I hope I have the honor to talk with you face to face. Looking forward to your reply.  Yours sincerely , Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分错误很少，但不够简短。第三段要简化，第二段要简练同时有条理。