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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the wanting vocation--Account Executive(AE) which I have seen from the China Advertising Online.
Major in advertising, I'm a girl coming from XXX University, postgraduate. I've learnt a lot customary rules about this area. Such as the process of the Ad company, the psychology of the customer and their customers. So I am experienced in the theory. Since I have done some Ad cases with my guider and have worked part-time job for a few Ad companies, I am experienced in practise.
Thank you for your timing reading my application. There's my E-mail:XXX@sina.com. I'm looking forward to your reply at your convenient.
Yours',
Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the wanting vocation--Account Executive(AE) which I have seen from the China Advertising Online.
Major in advertising, I'm a girl coming from XXX University, postgraduate. I've learnt a lot customary rules about this area. Such as the process of the Ad company, the psychology of the customer and their customers.（要注意这不是一完整的话，是前一句的例子）So I am experienced in the theory. Since I have done some Ad cases with my guider and have worked part-time job for a few Ad companies, I am experienced in practise（这是个动词，要用名词practice）.
Thank you for your timing（这是个名词，用在这里意思不合适，可以直接去掉） reading my application. There's my E-mail:XXX@sina.com. I'm looking forward to your reply at your convenient（这里需要用名词convenience）.
Yours'（Yours sincerely）（这一部分也位于右下角）,
Li Ming点评：5-6分注意用词、把握好词语的词性。第二段的两个方面可以简练一些，然后再加一条内容。