考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(159)

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam，
    I am a senior in the Politics and Law Department of Jilin Normal College. I am preparing for National Entrance Test of English for MA Candidates and I need a reference book called English Writing. So I am writing for you to help.
    First and foremost, do you offer any discount if I buy your book? Moreover, could you tell me the terms of payment? What’s more, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver by EMS to my address on the envelope by November 1, 2011.
    I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your consideration of my requests. I look forward to your early reply.
    Sincerely yours，
     LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam，I am a senior in the Politics and Law Department of Jilin Normal College. I am preparing for National Entrance Test of English for MA Candidates and I need a reference book called English Writing. So I am writing for you to help（write to sb for sth）.First and foremost, do you offer any discount if I buy your book? Moreover, could you tell me the terms of payment? What’s more, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver by EMS to my address on the envelope by November 1, 2011.I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your consideration of my requests. I look forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours， LiMing （落款位于右下角）点评：7分写的不错，就是模板的东西用的比较多。