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Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter to apply for the position of a statistical clerk published in your recruit advertisement in xx Daily . As a fresh graduated college student from xx University , I get my bachelor diploma of Statistic course in June this year. I believe I am capable to meet your acquirements for this job. Firstly, I have always achieved a high grade-point average at school in the four years , and I have passed CET-6 and the computer test band 2 as I was a freshman . In addition , I have attended an exercitation in a branch of Chinese Bank in my hometown in 2008, during my summer holiday . I worked there for a total month with the formal staffs , and I had finished all the ordered assignments in time while learning a lot about the daily work of a bank. Finally, I’m used to studying carefully and considering reasonably , so I think my personality just satisfies what the work calls for. My present goal is to obtain a basic job which is relevant to my main course, so that I’m able to practice myself by earning more experience.  Thank you for your time and consideration of my application . Frankly to look forward to your reply. Faithfully Yours,  Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing this letter to apply for the position of a statistical clerk published in your recruit advertisement in xx Daily .As a fresh graduated college student from xx University, I get my bachelor diploma of Statistic course in June this year. I believe I am capable to meet your acquirements for this job. Firstly, I have always achieved a high grade-point average at school in the four years, and I have passed CET-6 and the computer test band 2 as I was a freshman. In addition, I have attended an exercitation in a branch of Chinese Bank in my hometown in 2008, during my summer holiday. I worked there for a total month with the formal staffs, and I had finished all the ordered assignments in time while learning a lot about the daily work of a bank. Finally, I’m used to studying carefully and considering reasonably , so I think my personality just satisfies what the work calls for. My present goal is to obtain a basic job which is relevant to my main course, so that I’m able to practice myself by earning more experience. Thank you for your time and consideration of my application. Frankly to look forward to your reply. Faithfully Yours,  Li Ming点评：5-6分第二段不够简洁。超出字数会扣分。