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Dear Sir or Madam,
     As an Interior Design major from Liaoning University of technology.I wish to apply for the position of interior designer in your company which you advertised in our University BBS.I hope I can take this job.
     The main reason for my confidence in this position lies in both my extensive academic training and my work experience in the relevant industry which has further polisher polished my abilities,moreover I have much spare time this semester,which can ensure my time commitment for the internship,please find more details in my enclosed resume.
     Thank you for your time and patience,Iwould greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview.
     Yours sincerely
    LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, As an Interior Design major from Liaoning University of technology.（这句话不完整，主体部分是：as a major） I wish to apply for the position of interior designer in your company which you advertised in our University BBS.I hope I can take this job. The main reason for my confidence in this position lies in both my extensive academic training and my work experience in the relevant industry which has further polisher（去掉）polished my abilities, moreover I have much spare time this semester, which can ensure my time commitment for the internship, please find more details in my enclosed resume. Thank you for your time and patience, I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview. Yours sincerely（加逗号）LiMing 点评：6-7分写的还可以。第二段moreover后作为另一句。不要在格式上丢分。