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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the position of the Business Manager that you have advertised in China Daily of June 8.
There are several reasons to prove that I am a suitable person for this position.Firstly,I have the qualifications and experience for the job for 3 years and achieved good results.Secondly,I am a friendly person who can be quickly integrated into a new collective.Thirdly,not only do I have unlimited creative,but also I am a vigorous person who can work well under pressure.
Thank you very much for your time.If I can get a chance for a personal interview,I would be most grateful. （落款置于右下角）Yours sincerely LiMing （再尝试一次啊）
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the position of the Business Manager that you have advertised in China Daily of June 8. There are several reasons to prove that I am a suitable person for this position. Firstly, I have the qualifications and experience for the job for 3 years and achieved good results. Secondly, I am a friendly person who can be quickly integrated into a new collective. Thirdly, not only do I have unlimited creative, but also I am a vigorous person who can work well under pressure. Thank you very much for your time. If I can get a chance for a personal interview, I would be most grateful. （落款置于右下角）Yours sincerely（加逗号，）LiMing（另起一行，位于右下角）点评：7-8分写的很不错，言简意赅条理清晰，最后的落款部分要分两行。