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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or Madam，
   
    I am senior from the Department of Human Resource Management of Beijing University. I am writing to express my keen interest in the position of HR Assistant.
    My major and experience closely parallel your requirement. For one thing, I am highly motivated, energetic and cheerful. For another, I am good at communication skills. What is more, I have a strong sense of self-esteem, self-confidence, self-reliance, and self-improvement. This is an important driving force for progress and success.
   
    Thank you for your time and attention. If you have any question, please feel to call me at 88886666.
     Yours truly,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear sir or Madam，I am （加a）senior from the Department of Human Resource Management of Beijing University. I am writing to express my keen interest in the position of HR Assistant.My major and experience closely parallel your requirement. For one thing, I am highly motivated, energetic and cheerful. For another, I am good at communication skills. What is more, I have a strong sense of self-esteem, self-confidence, self-reliance, and self-improvement. This is an important driving force for progress and success.Thank you for your time and attention. If you have any question, please feel to call me at 88886666. Your（Yours）s truly, Li Ming点评：5-6分错误比较少。第二段写的不太好，把最重要的内容一句话带过了，你应该重点说你的学历和经验。你的三条内容都是有关personality的。