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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a graduate student of department of medicine in Beijing University. I am writing the letter to apply for the position of clinician.
    I have red the employment advertisement of your hospital in a newspaper and I am very interested in it. I think I am according with the requirement of your hospital. I am living in Shijiazhuang, have passed CET6 and obtained the credential of medical practitioner.
    Thank you for your consideration of my application at your convenience. I am looking forward to your reply.
     Yours sincerely，
    Li Ming（右下角）
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a graduate student of department of medicine in Beijing University. I am writing the letter to apply for the position of clinician.I have red（read的过去分词是read，读音有变） the employment advertisement of your hospital in a newspaper and I am very interested in it. I think I am according with the requirement of your hospital. I am living in Shijiazhuang, have（在have前加and，或者是改成having）passed CET6 and obtained the credential of medical practitioner. Thank you for your consideration of my application at your convenience. I am looking forward to your reply.  Yours sincerely，Li Ming（右下角）点评：5-6分第二段的内容应该是分两三条介绍你自己为什么适合做这项工作，而不是一句话带过。