考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(101)

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam, In reply to your advertisement in the poster on our campus, I beg to apply for the post of physician of your clinic.  To briefly introduce myself, I am a graduate from Guangzhou University of Chinese Medicine majoring in traditional Chinese medical science and expect graduation this June. Not only have I excellent academic performance in all course, I also possess rich experience of an intern. My well communication skills and teamwork spirit are also appropriate for this post. Thank you for your time and patience, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview.    Yours sincerely,  Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, In reply to your advertisement in the poster on our campus, I beg to（beg是恳求的意思，最好不要出现感情这样强烈的词语） apply for the post of physician of your clinic.  To briefly introduce myself, I am a graduate from Guangzhou University of Chinese Medicine majoring in traditional Chinese medical science and expect graduation（用to graduate比较好）this June. Not only have I excellent academic performance in all course, I also possess rich experience of an intern. My well communication skills and teamwork spirit are also appropriate for this post. Thank you for your time and patience, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview.    Yours sincerely,  Li Ming点评：7-8分写的很好。格式正确，语言简练，表达清楚完整。