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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam,
     I am writing the letter for apply the position of your company advised in newspape.The post of sell in full of my previous preparation and I will very proud if I working with you and other colleges in such name brand enterprise.AS a senior from the Department of Marking management,I prossess outstanding communication skills which can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.Past year I had been sold almost two hundred mobile phones in holiday,I rekon that it can become a advantage for the fierce competition.
I would apperciate it if you could considerate my cordially application.Thank you for your time.
yours turly,
Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）,  I am writing the letter for apply（改成to apply for） the position of your company advised（advertised） in newspape（拼写错误）. The post of sell in full of my previous preparation and I will very proud if I working with you and other colleges in such name brand enterprise.AS（As） a senior from the Department of Marking management, I prossess（拼写错误） outstanding communication skills which can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages. Past year I had been sold almost two hundred mobile phones in holiday, I rekon（拼写错误） that it can become a（an） advantage for the fierce competition.
I would apperciate（拼写错误） it if you could considerate my cordially application. Thank you for your time.
yours（Yours） turly（拼写错误）,
Li Ming（落款部分位于右下角）点评：5分应该是三段式，第一段你从哪看到了招聘广告及你申请的职位。第二段分条说出你申请此职业的优势，要简练而有条理。第三段结尾。拼写和格式都要注意，不要在这两方面丢分。