考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(111)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam ,
     I’m much cheerful to achieve the information of your ‘Teachers Wanted’ on the newspaper advertisement. Everyone knows that your teaching and research institute has good reputation and high quality. So I would like to join you sincerely and contribute my strength immediately.
     I have worked as an English teacher in Beijing New Oriental School for nearly two years.During these years’ teaching process, I have got sufficient teaching skills and experience and learnt how to get on well with my students and colleagues. I really believe that I can do my best to bring my premium team spirit here sharing with you.
     I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I wish a face-to-face conmmunication with you. There are more information about my resume in the following enclosure. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
     Truly yours,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,  I’m much cheerful to achieve the information of your ‘Teachers Wanted’ on the newspaper advertisement. Everyone knows that your teaching and research institute has good reputation and high quality. So I would like to join you sincerely and contribute my strength immediately. I have worked as an English teacher in Beijing New Oriental School for nearly two years. During these years‘ teaching process, I have got sufficient teaching skills and experience and learnt how to get on well with my students and colleagues. I really believe that I can do my best to bring my premium team spirit here sharing with you. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I wish a face-to-face conmmunication（拼写错误） with you. There are（应该用is）more information about my resume in the following enclosure. I‘m looking forward to hearing from you soon.  Truly yours,  Li Ming（落款部分位于右下角）点评：6-7分第一段有点过长，第二段只说了experience一个部分的内容，建议补充其他方面的内容。