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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam，
     I am a senior from the Department of Computer Science of LanZhou University.I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for your recently advertised position for a typist.
     I am sure that I am qualified for it.First,enclosed with this letter is my resume,which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience.Second,my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a typist.I am a very friendly person who can quickly get along well with everybody.
    I hope you can arrange a interview for me at your earliest convenience.Thank you for your consideration of my application.I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam， I am a senior from the Department of Computer Science of LanZhou（Lanzhou） University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for your recently advertised position for a typist.  I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a typist. I am a very friendly person who can quickly get along well with everybody.I hope you can arrange a（an） interview for me at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：6-7分第二段不要太空洞，最好再补充些内容，例如你具体的学习和经验。第三段可以再简短一些。