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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam,
     I am writing to express my interest in the position of teacher you have published in Online Education in last Sunday.
   
     I am major in History Design Of Department and have graduate last year. In addition to my major course, I minor in graphic design. Moreover，I have gained rich work experience in teaching. Besides, I am open-minded person who could quilkly establish a rapport with others. I believe that my knowledge and experience about this position will help me best for this job.
   
     Thank you for consideration my application. I am looking forword to meeting you in the near future.
      Yours respectfully,
     Li Ming
   
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to express my interest in the position of（加不定冠词a，最好说明是什么老师）teacher you have published in Online Education in（去掉） last Sunday.  I am major in History Design Of（去掉）Department and have graduate（现在完成时，这里用过去分词graduated） last year. In addition to my major course, I minor in graphic design. Moreover，I have gained rich work experience in teaching. Besides, I am（加不定冠词an）open-minded person who could quilkly（拼写错误）establish a rapport with others. I believe that my knowledge and experience about this position will help me best for this job. Thank you for consideration my application. I am looking forword（拼写错误） to meeting you in the near future.  Yours respectfully,（位于右下角） Li Ming 点评：6-7分写的还算可以，拼写错误有点多。注意细节。