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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a college student from HeBei University who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a waitress.
     I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which contains my previous work experience. Second, not only dose my experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. Third, I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish friend with others.
     I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a college student from HeBei（Hebei） University who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a waitress. I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which contains my previous work experience. Second, not only dose（does） my experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. Third, I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish friend with others. I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：6分这并是一个很好写的职业，因为它与你的学历并没有太大的关系。建议写专业一点的职业，其中可以涉及到你的学习专业、工作经验、和personality等信息。模板的东西不要用太多。