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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing this letter in purpose of apply for the position which your recently advertised on the website as a staff member.
     I am sure that I am qualified for it.To begin with,I graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Shandong University.During my academic years,I have shown excellent performance and have been awarded scholarships each year.In addition,I have two years woking experinece as a staff member in IBM company.Last ,not do my qualifications and experince make me an ideal candidate for it ,my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a staff member.
     I would be grateful if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in person the relevance of my educational background and working experinece.I look forward to your reply.
   
    Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in purpose of apply（介词后用动名词） for the position which your（加company） recently advertised on the website as a staff member. I am sure that I am qualified for it. To begin with, I graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Shandong University. During my academic years, I have shown excellent performance and have been awarded scholarships each year. In addition, I have two years（该称单数）woking experinece（两个词拼写错误）as a staff member in IBM company. Last ,not do my qualifications and experince（拼写错误） make me an ideal candidate for it ,my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a staff member. I would be grateful if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in person the relevance of my educational background and working experinece（拼写错误）. I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：6分中间内容需要简练一点。因为没有说出你要申请的具体职位，所以你的叙述针对性不强。