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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing this letter to apply for a sales-assistant position in your company according to the ads on newspaper.
I am an under graduating student from Shandong University. My major is Economics. I have done a lot to prepare for this kind of jobs during my school time.And Iworked as a sales-assistant in my part-time during everyvacation. What is more, my excellent behavior awarded myself an advanced individual prize in Summer-holiday Social Activities of Shandong University.
I am looking for your reply, and a face-to-face talk is expected. Please get contact with me according to the information in the attachment of this mail.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing this letter to apply for a sales-assistant（sales assistant）position in your company according to the ads on newspaper.
I am an under graduating（undergraduate）student from Shandong University. My major is Economics. I have done a lot to prepare for this kind of jobs during my school time. And Iworked as a sales-assistant（sales assistant） in my part-time（part time） during everyvacation. What is more, my excellent behavior awarded myself an advanced individual prize in Summer-holiday（Summer Holiday） Social Activities of Shandong University.
I am looking for your reply, and a face-to-face talk is expected. Please get contact with me according to the information in the attachment of this mail.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以，注意一些词语的使用，如果不是太熟悉或不太确定的地方，可以先查一下。 这样记得更牢。