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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir，
     I am writing to express my interst in your recently advertised position for a designer.
     I familarity with the progress in terms of its great skills and various of means.In my opinion，I have the appropriate experience for this post,and therefore here I am inclosing my curriculum vitae.
     I really wish to have the opportunity of working here.I would be much greatful if you could offer the position for me.So，i look forward to hearing from you soon.
      Your sincerely，
     Ling Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir（改成Sir or Madam）， I am writing to express my interst（拼写错误） in your recently advertised position for a designer. I familarity（拼写错误） with the progress in terms of its great skills and various of（去掉，various后直接加名词） means. In my opinion，I have the appropriate experience for this post, and therefore here I am inclosing my curriculum vitae. I really wish to have the opportunity of working here. I would be much greatful（拼写错误） if you could offer the position for me. So，i（大写） look forward to hearing from you soon.  Your sincerely， Ling Ming点评：5分内容太少，字数不够。第二段要简短而充实，分条写一下你的学历、经验等情况。另外要注意格式。